how i've grown as a writer

in my english class i have grown as a writer by doing all of my writing assigngents that she has givein me . she heled me learn how to write in paragraphs and how to put punctuation in the right spots . it's a lady in here named ms. walker. she is really the one who brought my writing skills up . she helps me all the time she pushes me to do all my work and when i mess up on my work she helps me get it right. when we did our poems in class she sat with me and was telling me

WGA assembly

The assembly was very intresting . The frst act was about a high school student who was frustrated about an issue at home. he was in the woods and his frend come up to him and was like whats wrong he was like nuthing come on lets get to school. at schoole a bully come up to him and said something about his mama so he just went off on him and fucked him up then the deen come in there and took him away and sent him home when he got home his mama was like your dad is going kill you if he fined out

poem

the lady and the maid

dont love but they hate

they scream and fight

and make people feel bad

the lady destroys them.

the maid does good thing for good

tells little alfie what he should do

the maid is tired

and alfie is a fighter

the maid belives

on magazins

she reads ofromance

but it hasnt happered

not even once

this is a mess

they fight like cats

they dont understand what friendship is like

they have big differences they cant agree

their all stressed up

but thats the way they like to be

stream of consciousness

whats on my maind? i wont to grt my license for the summer if i do im going have so much fun my mama just put the mustang in the pant shop to get evrey thing dun all over agen man i have not stored up that car in a yeare or to and when i did it just came right on it sound so good i got in it right and smached on the gas that shit seled on me i was like o.m.g. then i parked it in frunt of my house and called my mama so we can go jrop it off at the shop so i got on the freeway with it i was flying all the way to 190th street when i got there my mama pulled up on me and was like dont be driveing like that no more we got home i called my girl up on my phone i toled her when the car dun we going to arond the world and back she was like you crazy boy. Then my mama called me and was like come on letsgo get this other car then.

literary treasure

WOMAN by Nikki Giovanni

In this poem I feel that the character wants to be independent from a man. She feels this way because maybe she feels down because she wants to do something but he won't let her.the poem says. "She wanted to be a blade of grass amid the fields but he wouldn't agree to be the dandelion she wanted to be a robin singing through the leaves but he refused to be her tree"

When she is looking to be comforted he tells her no so she go's and look for a safe place to rest. The poem says "She spun herself into a web and looking for a place to rest turned to him but he stood straight declining to be her corner."

In this poem the man is pulling her down. Maybe he just not suporting her Like she wants him to. Or maybe she just wants to be independ from a man.